求职信,帮我看看有没有语法错误,谢谢……

发布网友 发布时间:2022-04-21 01:17

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热心网友 时间:2022-06-17 01:39

写得挺好的,格式我觉得用全部左对齐就行。是不是有点太正式了,比如用到了rapport 这词儿,还有这么简单的信里,复杂的句型就不必了,not only ..but also, to begin with ,whatis more 太拖沓啦。第二三段建议改为:
In July,as bachelor of journalism,I will graate from Peking University. Four years'theory study and society practice help me know how to communicate with people of all walks and ages.I believe I am qualified for this position.
Interview offer or any question from you,will be much appreciated.Please feel free to contact me at 010-xxxxxxx.

热心网友 时间:2022-06-17 01:39

of the January 5th 2010 改为 on January 5th 2010
but I also 改为 but also I
Should you grant me 改为If you ....
其它基本都可以啦,希望对你有所帮助!

热心网友 时间:2022-06-17 01:40

I'm very interested in applying for xxx position that you advertised on Youth Daily.

Not only do I have the qualifications (最好要列出来)for this job,but I also have the right personality (for example? )for a reporter.

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